Flußaugen

English translation: river eyes

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German term or phrase:Flußaugen
English translation:river eyes
Entered by: autoweaver

16:36 Jan 19, 2007
German to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / imaginary conversation
German term or phrase: Flußaugen
Die Frau mit den Flußaugen lachte gellend. Glauben Sie doch nur das nicht, schrie sie, der Kerl spielt ja nur!

Virginia Woolf speaking to Robert Walser (imagined)

My tentative attempt: "The woman with flowing eyes laughed shrilly. Only don't you believe that, she shrieked, the chap is only fooling."

(Perhaps the two onlys are less sustainable in English.)
autoweaver
United States
Local time: 10:53
river eyes
Explanation:
Why not just a literal translation.

There are hundreds of examples from English books:

http://books.google.de/books?q="river eyes"&as_brr=0

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Note added at 41 mins (2007-01-19 17:18:19 GMT)
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Excuse me, hundreds would be wildly exaggerating the number, but there are some good ones and I don't see reason not to use "river" as an adjective.

Here are some of the book examples:

Garth when he came home from a day on the river. Faith, the eyes of both were river eyes, green, flitting over golden shallows, flowing over bottomless ...

Through his river eyes flowed warm currents of gratitude. Clasping his precious manuscript in slender hands, he smiled and bowed, bowed and smiled his

Both from: The Listening Man by Lucy Embury http://books.google.de/books?vid=ISBN1419140647&id=1HKiJKIMf...

... with silver and her lower lip was bleeding her river eyes were flooded with tears. ...

I had to look twice because she was dressed in dirty sacking, sparkling with frost, and all I could see were her large, river eyes and one fair curl. ...

From the well-known "Seeing Stone"

http://books.google.de/books?vid=ISBN0439263271&id=UjcB2mbsr...
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Henry Schroeder
United States
Local time: 10:53
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Millay Hyatt is never wrong.
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Summary of answers provided
3 +2river eyes
Henry Schroeder
3riverine eyes
casper (X)
2 +1limpid eyes
jccantrell
2with eyes like a river/like a stream
BrigitteHilgner
1river-weary
Johanna Timm, PhD


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with eyes like a river/like a stream


Explanation:
To get the ball rolling - I am sure there are more poetic solutions.

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Note added at 10 mins (2007-01-19 16:46:50 GMT)
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By the way: a bit more context would help: What are the two talking about? Where do they meet? Who is imagining all this?

BrigitteHilgner
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river-weary


Explanation:
...maybe...since Ms. Woolf drowned herself in a river...

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riverine eyes


Explanation:
A direct translation

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river eyes


Explanation:
Why not just a literal translation.

There are hundreds of examples from English books:

http://books.google.de/books?q="river eyes"&as_brr=0

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Note added at 41 mins (2007-01-19 17:18:19 GMT)
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Excuse me, hundreds would be wildly exaggerating the number, but there are some good ones and I don't see reason not to use "river" as an adjective.

Here are some of the book examples:

Garth when he came home from a day on the river. Faith, the eyes of both were river eyes, green, flitting over golden shallows, flowing over bottomless ...

Through his river eyes flowed warm currents of gratitude. Clasping his precious manuscript in slender hands, he smiled and bowed, bowed and smiled his

Both from: The Listening Man by Lucy Embury http://books.google.de/books?vid=ISBN1419140647&id=1HKiJKIMf...

... with silver and her lower lip was bleeding her river eyes were flooded with tears. ...

I had to look twice because she was dressed in dirty sacking, sparkling with frost, and all I could see were her large, river eyes and one fair curl. ...

From the well-known "Seeing Stone"

http://books.google.de/books?vid=ISBN0439263271&id=UjcB2mbsr...

Henry Schroeder
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Millay Hyatt is never wrong.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  mill2: (hi there, autoweaver!)
1 day 1 hr

agree  Stephen Reader: Yes, esp. with ref. to Johanna's note - and with Francis's proviso. Is the biog. assoc. intended?
1 day 4 hrs
  -> Now you're appearing all over the place. Thanx.
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limpid eyes


Explanation:
I have to admit, I have NO idea what the author is trying to say with this term. However, don't we use limpid for this water reference in English:

lim·pid /ˈlɪmpɪd/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[lim-pid] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–adjective
1. clear, transparent, or pellucid, as water, crystal, or air: We could see to the very bottom of the limpid pond.
2. free from obscurity; lucid; clear: a limpid style; limpid prose.
3. completely calm; without distress or worry: a limpid, emotionless existence.

Just a thought.


    Reference: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/limpid
jccantrell
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Stephen Reader: Cogent: if the piece doesn't want a perhaps overly blunt ref. to the 'river' in V.W.'s life/death
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