Glossary entry

German term or phrase:

es solle ihm auf eine Erkenntlichkeit nicht ankommen

English translation:

however, he should not count on signs of gratitude

Added to glossary by Angie Schneider
May 15, 2008 12:30
16 yrs ago
German term

es solle ihm auf eine Erkenntlichkeit nicht ankommen

German to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Short Story
This comes from the short story, "Gerechtigkeit" by Werner Bergengruen. The story is about a land steward who feels his has been wronged by a farmer; it appears he has wronged the farmer; in the end, the farmer had deceived the steward.

Der Vogt rief den Bauern an, er moechte ihm den Mantel borgen, es solle ihm auf eine Erkenntlichkeit nicht ankommen. Der Bauer entgegnete, der Mantel sei sein, er brauch ihn selbst und sei kein Verleiher.
Does this mean that the farmer should have been appreciative that the steward (Vogt) had approached him? Or that appreciation was not given to the steward?

Discussion

Lancashireman May 16, 2008:
“Der Großtyrann und das Gericht (1935), is set in the renaissance era and is the story of a merciless tyrant playing with the weaknesses of his underlings…” Different work, same author, similar theme. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Werner_Bergengruen

Proposed translations

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however, he should not count on signs of gratitude

It's just the opposite, "er soll dafür keine Dankbarkeit oder Gegenleistung erwarten".
Peer comment(s):

agree Lancashireman : Also how I read it, but then I do tend to see irony in a writer’s style where none may actually exist. The second extract (see next question) suggests that Bergengruen is lampooning the Vogt’s attitude. Much depends on who the second ‘ihm’ refers to.
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Thanks!
agree Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
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Thanks!
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he can be sure of a token of the steward’s(!) appreciation.

While there may be better ways to word this, I am rather sure that the steward demands the coat and assures the farmer that he will receive something in return.

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Note added at 33 mins (2008-05-15 13:04:00 GMT)
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Angie, please read this carefully. „...er brauche ihn selbst und sei kein **Verleiher**“. (does not rent for money). Erkenntlichkeit: token of appreciation, small reward.

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Note added at 44 mins (2008-05-15 13:14:46 GMT)
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Also, please mind my reply to Andrew’s response. Nada in this sentence hints to a difference in social standing. Erkenntlichkeit kommt von „sich erkenntlich zeigen“ (show one's appreciation).

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Note added at 18 hrs (2008-05-16 06:33:05 GMT)
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In my Note added at 44 mins, I am referring to ‘Andrew’s response’, which he chose to remove. Hence again: „Auf [whatever] soll es mir nicht ankommen“ is an idiomatic expression and a set phrase in German. See http://tinyurl.com/6e7ta6
Note from asker:
Nothing is being offered in return for the coat. As I read it, the steward believes the farmer should give it to him, because he is of a higher social status than the farmer.
Peer comment(s):

agree seehand : sehe ich auch so, auch die Begründung
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agree franglish : just so
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agree Rebecca Garber : very clear.
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agree Johanna Timm, PhD : verstehe ich auch ganz genau so.
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Danke, Johanna.
neutral Richard Benham : This just doesn't seem to make sense like this.
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Well, it does, if you appreciate literary flavors of subjunctive mood and indirect speech.
neutral Lancashireman : Dear David, We both share the same understanding of the idiom. The problem lies in the interpretation. My original comment was a ‘neutral’ and still is, because of the uncertainty surrounding the identity of the second ’ihm’. R Benham makes a fair point.
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Sure, but as I see it, the second „ihm“ is not ambiguous at all, if you read & understand: „Der Bauer entgegnete, der Mantel sei sein, er brauchE (!) ihn selbst und sei kein **Verleiher**.“ Wouldn't you agree?
agree yaprak atak : this comes closest to my understanding ... however the irony suggests that he does not see any obligation to do so, he would not be short of a reward
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