... las comisuras de mi alma...

Portuguese translation: ... as feridas da minha alma...

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Spanish term or phrase:... las comisuras de mi alma...
Portuguese translation:... as feridas da minha alma...
Entered by: Maria do Rosário Quadros

03:44 Oct 7, 2013
Spanish to Portuguese translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Vocabulário
Spanish term or phrase: ... las comisuras de mi alma...
Si las nubes no anticipan en sus formas la historia de los hombres

Si los colores del río no figuran los designios del dios de las aguas

Si no remiendas con tus manos de astromelias las comisuras de mi alma

Si mis amigos no son una legión de ángeles clandestinos

¿Qué será de mí?
Veronikka (X)
... as feridas da minha alma...
Explanation:
A minha sugestão, visto ser um texto poético.
Mas qualquer das palavras sugeridas pela Maria Soares me parece correcto.
Selected response from:

Maria do Rosário Quadros
Portugal
Local time: 20:24
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4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +5... as feridas da minha alma...
Maria do Rosário Quadros
4 +3as fendas/ as gretas/os rasgos/ as suturas/ as comissuras da minha alma
Maria Soares


  

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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
as fendas/ as gretas/os rasgos/ as suturas/ as comissuras da minha alma


Explanation:
Penso que qualquer uma delas é válida. É uma questão de gosto.

Maria Soares
Spain
Local time: 21:24
Native speaker of: Portuguese
PRO pts in category: 16

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Maria do Rosário Quadros: Maria, fiz uma sugestão diferente dada a natureza poética do texto
4 hrs
  -> Olá Rosário, "as feridas da minha alma", excelente sugestão, aliás, a mais comum. Um abraço.

agree  Ludmila Portela
7 hrs
  -> Obrigada Ludmila.

agree  Nathaniel Braia
2 days 7 hrs
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +5
... as feridas da minha alma...


Explanation:
A minha sugestão, visto ser um texto poético.
Mas qualquer das palavras sugeridas pela Maria Soares me parece correcto.

Maria do Rosário Quadros
Portugal
Local time: 20:24
Native speaker of: Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Selected automatically based on peer agreement.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Ludmila Portela
2 hrs
  -> Obrigada! :)

agree  Catarina Lopes
4 hrs
  -> Obrigada! :)

agree  Gil Costa
10 hrs
  -> Obrigada!:)

agree  Arlete Moraes
1 day 1 hr
  -> Obrigada! :)

agree  Silvia Seoane
3 days 21 hrs
  -> Obrigada! :)
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