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21:02 Sep 24, 2013 |
Spanish to English translations [PRO] Bus/Financial - Advertising / Public Relations / Press Release | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Charles Davis Spain Local time: 02:13 | ||||||
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commiting a serious offence Explanation: I think you really need to turn the phrase/sentence around a bit at the end, soemthing along these lines: "... incurriendo en grave falta las Entidades responsables de su tolerancia o legalización. " -> " with the Entities (organizations, bodies, etc) responsible for (its) tolerance or legalization being liable to penalties for such a serious offence. " -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2013-09-24 21:15:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "... misleading the consumer, a serious misdemeanour for which the Entities responsible may be subject to penalisation..." -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 13 mins (2013-09-24 21:15:52 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Por allí van los tiros... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 16 mins (2013-09-24 21:19:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Although there is no specific mention of penalties, simply the offence/misdemeanour, I think that is what is suggested. Here's another stab at it: -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 17 mins (2013-09-24 21:20:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "... misleading the consumer, a serious offence committed by the Entidies responsible..." -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 18 mins (2013-09-24 21:21:10 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- BTW I like "Entities" less and less the more I look at it... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 19 mins (2013-09-24 21:21:59 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "... misleading the consumer, constituting a serious offence committed by the Organisations responsible..." |
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