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22:35 Jun 8, 2008 |
Spanish to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Advertising / Public Relations | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Erin DeBell United States Local time: 20:40 | ||||||
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results should always be measured Explanation: I would probably change around the syntax of this one: Results should always be measured in this type of system. Not sure what to do with "detrás" ... seems like it just complicates the sentence in English, but you could say, "Behind a system such as this, it is always necessary to measure results." Other ideas? -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 10 mins (2008-06-08 22:46:11 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Or "behind such a system," but that wasn´t the phrase in question. :) |
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there should always be result measurement/verification Explanation: suerte |
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should always be underpinned by an evaluation process Explanation: OR there should always lie a process for evaluating the results but I feel this is slightly awkward in English, and would perhaps suggest changing it around to make it flow better: Any System of this type always needs a process for evaluating results If you simply say "an evaluation" this implies only ONE evaluation, and not an ongoing process. I think this needs to be specified, although it's only implied in the text. Conversely, I feel it might not be necessary to specify that i's the results that are being evaluated, as this seems obvious. But if that's not the case (from the context), then I'd include that as well |
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