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09:03 Jan 25, 2005 |
German to English translations [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Engineering: Industrial | |||||||
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4 | s.u. |
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4 | it needs tdiying up as follows: |
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3 | Suggestion ... |
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3 | a bit more tidying up |
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s.u. Explanation: ..which allows railroad wagons or trucks unhindered, direct access to ... |
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sentence Suggestion ... Explanation: It sounds OK to me except for some un-English turns of phrase. Here's a possible clean-up: Our latest product, which is still in the design stage, is the AHC 1000 mobile – a high-gantry crane that allows railroad wagons and trucks unhindered access to quayside areas. If you're using US English (railroad, trucks), you might consider "cars" rather than "wagons". My dictionary says that "wagons" is GB English, but as I'm not a US speaker I can't be sure on that. Ask! |
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it needs tdiying up as follows: Explanation: Our latest product, which is still in the design stage, is the....., a high-clearance gantry crane that allows railway wagons or trucks unhindered access to the........ I have tried to keep as much of your original as possible -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2005-01-25 09:19:42 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- tidying TYPO |
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Kran mit Hochportal, der eine ungehinderte Zufahrt der Eisenbahn direkt zu den Kaiflächen gewährlei a bit more tidying up Explanation: ...that allows unobstructed rail and truck/lorry access to... 'truck'= US, 'lorry'= UK; 'rail' is OK for both (otherwise it's 'railroad car' in the US and 'railway wagon' in the UK) |
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