initial paperwork

Chinese translation: 当初填写的资料

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English term or phrase: initial paperwork
Chinese translation:当初填写的资料
Entered by: clearwater

05:28 Oct 28, 2008
English to Chinese translations [PRO]
Social Sciences - Sports / Fitness / Recreation / club members retention
English term or phrase: initial paperwork
"We have an entire system of what we say and how we say it," Page says. "We don't say, 'We miss you, where've you been?' Because it just reinforces the fact that they're paying for nothing. The script now goes something like, 'I noticed on your {initial paperwork} when you joined, you said you were interested in x, and I wanted you to know we have a class on Wednesday and would love to invite you in for it. I'll be here, ask for me.' We have found that the more calls we make like that -- proposing alternatives and solutions and scheduling them for appointments or another assessment -- the lower our attrition rate goes."
clearwater
China
Local time: 09:52
入会时填写的资料
Explanation:
不一定是个人信息,也可能是有关你的身高体重,或你对什么项目感兴趣,或你想通过运动达到什么效果之类的信息。
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dd dd
Local time: 09:52
Grading comment
谢谢!
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4 +3在最初加入(此健身房)時所填寫的個人資料
y_lewarne
4 +3入会时填写的资料
dd dd


  

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在最初加入(此健身房)時所填寫的個人資料


Explanation:
FYI

y_lewarne
Taiwan
Local time: 02:52
Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese
PRO pts in category: 7
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Asker: 非常感谢!


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  oceano
13 mins
  -> Thank you!

agree  Jinhang Wang
1 hr
  -> Thank you!

agree  Frank Wang: 在健身房,可以说“办会员卡”,但不能说“入会”,因为健身房不是会。在个人加入时,无论填写什么,都是个人资料(不是个人资料是谁的资料?)。
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17 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
入会时填写的资料


Explanation:
不一定是个人信息,也可能是有关你的身高体重,或你对什么项目感兴趣,或你想通过运动达到什么效果之类的信息。

dd dd
Local time: 09:52
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
谢谢!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  TRANS4CHINA
58 mins

agree  Jinhang Wang
1 hr

agree  Yurek
2 hrs
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