请教专利翻译应该注意的问题

Ysunoz wrote:

多谢ysun前辈。那个统计是以前想专利的时候，在哪里看到的。具体什么不记得了，但是就这么一句给印象深刻的留下来了。
跑题下，我开始在这里申请时，按自己名字来，是和前辈一样的呢。可是即使大写Y开头也没通过，只好多加了2个字母。今天再细看，你的都是小写啊。看来一样就不行的啊。

手边有这个，先请教了。化学的我回头也贴来。终于有可以好好学习的机会了：）多谢哈！

Mechanical
Detailed Statement

1. Invention’s name
Endoscope Treatment Tool

2. Invention’s claim scope
An endoscope treatment tool consisting of a high frequency radio wave knife, is inserted into the channel of the endoscope. A high frequency radio wave is sent through the operation wire to reach the tip of the knife for ablation of the affected tissue. This type of operational wire tip functions by a plasma process to form the knife. This is the characteristic of this endoscope treatment tool.

3. Detailed description of the invention
[Field of the invention]
This endoscope treatment tool, more specifically, is used as a high frequency radio wave cutting knife. The high frequency radio wave knife is inserted in the channel of the endoscope, and uses high frequency radio waves to make incisions inside the body cavity.

[Background of the invention]
It is well known that one of the endoscope treatment tool is this high frequency radio wave cutting knife which is inserted with flexible movement within the channel (5), that is itself inside the endoscopes’(1) hand manipulators(2), the piece that is inserted into the body cavity(3), and the tip (4), as shown in figure 4. This high frequency radio wave knife (7) is fixed to the tip of the operational wire (6) (refer to figure 5). The operational wire is inserted into a tube and can move inside the curvature of the tube (12) that is inserted into the channel (5). Furthermore, in figure 4, #8 is the eye piece, 9 is the finger hanging ring, 10 is the slider. The finger hanging ring (9) and slider (10), as above described, are the component of the hands manipulator when the high frequency radio knife (7) used by the hands. This hands manipulator has electrode terminal, which send high frequency radio wave to wire (6) as above described. Traditionally, this type of high frequency radio wave knifes’ (7) base and operation wires’ (6) tip are inserted into connection vibes’ (11) two ends. After two parts to be connected, by using connection vibes’ (11) low affix injection hole (11a), low affix process can make two parts connected. Furthermore, in figure 5, #12 is curvature cube that has operation wire (6) inserted through. #13 is fixed on the tip of curvature cube (12).。。。。

Ysunoz wrote:

[Field of the invention]
This invention relates to a useful photosensitive component for the printing plate material, specifically, for photosensitive components that are highly sensitive.

Ysunoz wrote:

2. Invention’s claim scopes
(1)
(A) General Formula for thioxanthenyl group
[In the formula, Z1 and Z2 each represent an independent benzo ring or naphtho ring, and at least one of them contains a substitute with a heteroatom.]
(B) Polymerizable compound and,
(C) Photosensitive components, in visible light range, contains sensitive photopolymerization start reagent.
(2) Photosensitive components are labeled as amino group (D) described in claim (1).
(3) According to claim (1) and (2), photosensitive components are used to form a photosensitive layer. On this layer a latent image will be formed after exposing an image to it using visible light. The latent image can be revealed after exposure to UV light. This is the characteristic of photopolymerizable image form method.
Edited at 2010-06-11 13:52 GMT]

Ysunoz wrote:

[Field of the invention]
This invention relates to a useful photosensitive component for the printing plate material, specifically, for photosensitive components that are highly sensitive.

Ysunoz wrote:

幸而是老孙热心给指导。这个要是付学费，我是不要破产的？又是周末，又是你交大稿前：）真谢谢了！

现在记得是，原文那个claim1后是图，然后才是claim2的。具体内容得我回头去看看。

看了你最后1句的总结，很经验累积的言之有理呀。应该出本书，来总结下全面的怎样做化学专利翻译。日本人就有本针对英文专利翻译的书的。我们也该从ProZ的网页上发展出去，发扬宏大：0 到时，即使我不做翻译了，也一定去买本来留做人生路上的一段回忆。